Omar comments:

• Scope and feasibility
  • This is clear, approachable, and definitely within the scope of what you can accomplish in the first assignment
  • Audio is definitely feasible for this assignment, you can actually embed audio files without even using javascript
  • 8 pages is a lot. I recommend doing fewer pages and making them more fleshed out
• Concept
  • Overall I like the concept. I particularly like the suggestion of including audio and making this an immersive experience.
  • Is there anything you can do to enhance the sensory experience? Or to maybe make the story less linear, more fragmented and networked?
  • Some ideas on adding more non-linearity and immersion
    • Maybe you land your reader directly into an experience of sipping on tea. The reader hears a description of the tea, and then decides whether they want something similar, or different, and depending on their choice they go into viewing another type of tea

I think the audio may be too much for me in 2 weeks, but I think keeping the slide show on the last page is fine. Also on the first page there should be two buttons on the first page one that says “smell the leaves” and one that says “tea shops through memory lane”. I will also need to make another page that has a section for each tea. I should be able to just have them organized by section, and so when you click a specific tea you will just to a new page at that specific section.

• have the audio be a tea shop or tea soundscape
• can play audio on each page, change to 4 pages or so of tea
• FL studio (for beats)